Well, this is pretty cool. Publisher’s Weekly, the industry’s leading news and review publication, gave Pandemonium a starred review. (And already I can hear my Mom wondering what a star means, and I don’t really know. My rough count says that about 10% of the reviews get a star.  So, harder to get than a star from Mrs. Melbaum, my kindergarten teacher, but much easier to get than a star on the Walk of Fame.)

Here’s the review:

Believable characters, a multilayered plot and smooth prose define Gregory’s darkly ambitious debut novel. In this fascinating alternative time line, thousands of demon possessions have been carefully recorded by scientists each year since the 1950s. Each case is always the same: a recognizable, named “strain of the disorder” possesses a person, wreaks havoc and then jumps on to its next victim. Del Pierce’s case is unique: when the Hellion possessed him at the age of five, it never left. Now an unhappy 20-something, Del undertakes a dangerous quest to exorcise the Hellion as it fights him for control. The trim prose keeps the pace intense and the action red hot through some emotionally disturbing scenes and heavy backstory. Absorbing psychological discussions of possession abound, from Jungian archetypes to the eye of Shiva. Readers will delve deeply into Gregory’s highly original demon-infested reality and hope for a sequel. (Sept.)  PW page.

My only problem? The next book (the latest draft of which is going to my publisher on August 1) has nothing to do with the world of Pandemonium.

I did an interview with one of the PW reporters a few weeks ago — I’m not sure when they’ll be running that.

Consider Schrodinger’s famous cat, hovering between life and death until someone opens the box to observe it.  Now consider the first novel, after it’s been sent to reviewers, but before a review has been posted.

You can see why that can be stressful. Have I written a deceased feline, or a lively one? Or is it merely half-dead– say, a cat missing a major organ or two?

Now, I’m not one to put my self esteem into the hands of reviewers. (I put that into the hands of my dog, who loves me unconditionally, even if I forget to feed her. ) But still, what writer doesn’t want his or her book to be liked?

A couple weeks ago my publisher sent out the advance review copies of Pandemonium. I’d been too busy to think about it much (a slight lie) because I was cramming to finish the first draft of my new book. But I happened to notice (okay, I happened to google for “Pandemonium” and my own name) that a few of the reviewers out there who keep blogs had received the book, and one had read the opening. But there hadn’t been a review yet.

Until this morning, when my old editor, since moved on to another publishing house, sent me a link to this article on the Agony Column, an sf book review site.

The short answer: to at least one observer, the cat shows signs of life. If I could I would stop there– take my one positive review and tell everybody to drive safe and tip their waitress — but there are more reviews to come (I think). And then of course, it will be up to the opinion of the people who really get to decide whether you get to publish a second book, or a third one– the readers. But they won’t get the book until August 26.

So, the quantum indeterminancy continues. The cat is out of the bag. Or box. And if it turns out that the cat is decomposing, at least my dog likes my compositions.

So after about six months of a drum roll playing nonstop in my head, I finally got to see the cover for my book that’s coming out this August.  For the first-time novelist, this is a bit like seeing a sonogram of your first-born — your first thought is, Yikes, it’s real! Your second is, Can I get a printout of that?

I also found the cover much more attractive than the sonograms of either of my children. Both of those kids looked like Doppler Radar weather maps. 

I thought I’d write about this strange, graphical gestation period because (a) before it began I had no clue how the cover-creation process worked, and (b) even now I have no idea if my experience was typical. 

Part one: In which the Author Searches for his Own Opinion

 It started with Fleetwood Robbins, my editor at the time (who has since, to my great sadness, left Del Rey to go to Wizards of the Coast — may they suffer a thousand hit points of damage for luring him away), asking me, Did I have any ideas about the cover?

Now, I’ve been a tech writer, a marketing writer who used to publish corporate newsletters, and a web designer. I have ideas about what I like in design. But I’m fundamentally a text guy, and I know my limitations. Because I’ve been lucky to work with gifted graphic artists, I’ve learned that someone with an artist’s eye can  come up with something I’d never have thought of, and render it beautifully. I did not want to muck with that.

Also, what did I know about what made a good cover? Like all readers, I liked some covers better than others. But why did I like them? And even if I figured out the whats and whys, would that help me know what would make a good cover for my book?  I suspected not.

But Fleetwood asked.  So I went to the book store and started squinting at shelves, and started keeping track of my favorites. 

I loved the covers on the Charlie Huston vampire novels — the bands of color, the strong typography, the cropped photographs (with fangs added). It looked cool, fun but literary. Plus, I preferred the papery feel of the covers, as opposed to something slick.

I also very much liked the cover for China Mieville’s Looking for Jake. I loved combination of a muted palette and a single, strong iconic image.

That stenciled butterfly on Nick Sagan’s IdleWild caught my attention. I also realized that my cover could be greatly enhanced by changing my name to Sagan.

I liked this one too, for Conrad Williams’ London Revenant. The photo montage face struck me as a little too messy, but the cover was saved by the use of the London underground symbol, the strong banded colors at the bottom, and the clean typography.

So from these examples and a few others I deduced a few of my own preferences. I liked muted palettes (mostly), a single iconic image over a montage (mostly), and papery covers over slick (again, mostly — but did I just like them because they seemed more “literary”? Did it make a difference?). 

I sent off this “analysis” to Fleetwood. Now it makes me cringe. Thank goodness it had almost no effect on the cover.

Part Two:  In which the Editor Explains what the Author’s Opinion Should Be

So how did we end up with the final product? As you may have suspected from the subheading, it was Fleetwood’s idea.

I’d suggested a couple images from the book — a slingshot, a boy lying in the water, a couple other things — and Fleetwood said, What about the farmhouse? In the novel there’s a recurring image of a farmhouse — literally a recurring image, in that farmhouse keeps showing up in a series of mysterious paintings and sculptures. Fleetwood wrote that “the tranquil pastoral scene juxtaposed with the title may be interesting.” 

At first I was nonplussed. Would genre readers pick up a book with just a farm on the cover? How would we even signal that it was a genre book? The story’s about about demonic possession and Jungian archetypes, for goodness’ sake.

Then I started thinking a little more about it. Okay, I wrote to Fleetwood, it might be cool if the illustration at first looked pastoral, but something about the tone or mood suggested something more disturbing. And it also might be interesting if at first it looks like the cover is just a painting of a farm, but then there’s a hand or shadow or something that suggests this is a picture of a picture — we are seeing an artifact from the book as it’s being created.

Part Three: In which the Author Shuts Up and Lets the Artist Speak. A Little.

Finally it was time to bring in an artist. Greg Ruth (gregthings.com) is an illustrator and comic artist who’s recently worked with Kurt Busiek on his Conan the Barbarian series, and with Steve Niles on the beautiful Freaks of the Heartland. I hadn’t seen his work before, and didn’t even know his name until Del Rey sent me the cover, but I’m very happy they found him.

I e-mailed Greg and asked him if he could tell me  how he got sucked into this project and what the process was like from his end. He graciously wrote back and said I could post his comments.

Greg writes:

Well I had met David Stephenson, the AD on this project last summer via my agent, Allen Spiegel. They had worked together in the past and Allen wanted us to meet with an eye towards working on something in the future. I have been doing a whole raft of covers for a bunch of different genres this last year, and was eager to see what we could do for this novel. David called me up with this project based mostly on what they liked about the first cover I did for a Dark Horse Comics series called “Freaks of the Heartland”. It featured an old hillltop farmhouse, menacing skies…. it was a perfect fit for what he wanted. SO the trick was to deliver something from that same source, but that would be utterly different as well. Often times I get the chance to read the manuscript, and pull an image for the cover from the text as I see it, other times the AD or the publisher already have an idea of what they want. This case fell into the second category, and while I typically prefer to find the cover in the book myself, we had precious little time before the solicitation catalogue, and so having a clear direction helped get us going. In a case like this, I tend to end up asking a good deal of questions to the AD to try and get the tone and feel of the book. Dave is great and had a lot to say, being a really accomplished illustrator and designer himself. Covers should sell and I think, enhance the book. They should reflect the story being told inside and I always find that if you look at the cover and it makes you want to know more, then read the book and look at the cover again and get more from it, that’s a success.

So. After a few quick pack and forth pencil sketches we settled on one and went to the final. I went straight to paints, making sure to keep the hand and brush portion as a separate layer, digitally, so David could move it about to accommodate the text. Sometimes a cover just pops right out perfect the first time, other instances it’s a long slow drag out of the cave- this one came on pretty solid out of the gate. Once the final was done there were only a few tweaks. It was a pretty smooth process. Fairly typical for a larger publisher with a committee system, and I look forward to doing more with Random House in the future.

Thanks, Greg. 

David Stevenson, the Del Rey art director Greg mentioned, also solved the problem of how to signal that it was a genre book by suggesting that the the word “demon” be highlighted in red. And when the first draft of the cover came back it was Chris Schleup (the senior Del Rey editor who took me on when Fleetwood left) who suggested further tweaks, like toning down the red in “demon” to keep it more in the tonal range of the rest of the cover, and making the bottom of the picture degenerate into brush marks, as if it were a work in progress.

Epilogue: In which the Author Awaits the Opinion of the Market

 So. A cover. I can’t wait to see what it looks like when it’s born.  I mean, printed.

I’ll also have to wait to see how the book will sell. But if the numbers are poor I’m pretty confident it’ll be the fault of the book’s interior, not Greg’s cover.